svn11's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Race of Beings PT2]

great job

Keep up the good work.. Next time try to be a little more consistant with your buttons.. Great story line ;) I love well drawn robots..

Cerberust responds:

OOOh thank you thank you, your flash tutorial series your starting will help ,many people, and i commend you on submiting something like that in an attempt to help people out.

[Race of Beings PT1]

Wow.

Great Job for your first Flash project.

Cerberust responds:

hey thanx seveneleven, it was my first flash, my second episode is much better and the third is a minute long at 512 k so far, so itll be more graphically intense.

[Scary Halloween]

Good job :)

That was pretty funny.. make more..

[ooh, lucky]

Funny, Good job

Work on your artwork.

That is all.

[Cartoon fun]

Funny ;)

But needs to be longer, and it appears to "jitter" what you should to do instead of using multiple screenshots: you need to use 1 frame for your background (from the way the pictures jumped from frame to frame it looked like you didn't so if you did sorry) then use transparent gifs for the creatures.. You can make your own "Voice bubbles" on another layer (behind the animals and infront of the background) and pick a similar font.. that will cut down on filesize too and allow you far more manipulation. (like you could have gotten the piggy alot closer) Hope this helps.. if you want you can email me at [e-mail].. Happy to provide suggestions / help.

bjenkins responds:

Thanks for the good review, I normaly do all of the things you suggested, but this is made with a cartoon program that was made for little kids from the 80s. it has preset characters and animation, so i had to convert it to flash with screen shots, and it's too hard to line that many pictures up (about 200) Thanks anyways, this is really good advice.

[Truth Spoof]

Funny..

But I am not sure it made complete entire sense.. anti drug is weed? You should have said your anti-propaganda is weed... or something heh then used the the same font you used for truth to spell out propaganda..

[toilet troubles]

Lol

Just work on your actual drawing, you have the concepts of perception of movement (zooming in on the toliet etc) down really well.. nice work

[-forrest gump-]

Good job

The damn feather took too long to fall though ;) should have made that a little shorter.. but good job all around

[AlphaZekko 5]

oh man..

I smell top 50

[Percentage Preloader]

I was going to give you a 3, but you get a 5

because the reviewer below me was a little bitch... I appreciate that at least SOME people try to help others.. Keep making the Tutorials man.. maybe make them a little more interactive with small screenshot cutouts of what you are trying to explain.. so people have an easier time.. then make back and forward buttons so we can use it side by side with Flash..
If there are enough good tutorials maybe Tom might put them off to the side under a new collections section.. (dunno an just an idea)
Thanks for your time on this..

SolarKS responds:

Thanks :).

IMO, people who give out bad reviews and dont even know what flash is/or never used flash..

You ppl just plain suck! You are so dumb I could write a book of it! I can spit in your face if needed, I can whina all day, but those people just keep on being stupid.

if this message goes through those small-brained guys.. and you speak proper English..


LEARN TO USE FLASH AND ONE DAY YOU MIGHT SAY: THIS GUY WAS SO RIGHT AND I DID NEED THIS OR ELSE EvERY MOVIE IN NEWGROUNDS ARE NON-PRELOADING!