Funny ;)
But needs to be longer, and it appears to "jitter" what you should to do instead of using multiple screenshots: you need to use 1 frame for your background (from the way the pictures jumped from frame to frame it looked like you didn't so if you did sorry) then use transparent gifs for the creatures.. You can make your own "Voice bubbles" on another layer (behind the animals and infront of the background) and pick a similar font.. that will cut down on filesize too and allow you far more manipulation. (like you could have gotten the piggy alot closer) Hope this helps.. if you want you can email me at stealth@flash.net.. Happy to provide suggestions / help.